| These are the critiques I have done fell free to vote if they are fair or not. And feel free to ask me to critique your art. |
| These are the critiques I have done fell free to vote if they are fair or not. And feel free to ask me to critique your art. |

a writing contest: FallingFALLINGa writing contest: Falling by ~Leafstripe77
As I looked through past the trees I saw Jason walking through the forest. He was blind! What was he doing out here all alone? I started to follow him as he walked. The wind was blowing very hard and Jason had to push forward with every step, his black hair blowing out behind him. I was on my way over to ask what he was doing out here all alone when the edge of the river appeared in front of me. But it was too late. I fell, my arms out in front of me trying to break my fall, but entirely useless because I was falling into water. The fall felt like it took a very long time, but it was only a few feet. It felt like I was going to die,
| These are artist's work that I have loved!!!! |
